Choke Me

Choke me with your kiss,

and f**k me

‘till my heart stops

beating to the sound

of your breathing.

Lay waste to your mind,

and your soft skin

against my soul,

until the sun is gone

and sadness is no more

here than there.

Reviews

[chelsea jackson]

I absolutely love how raw your poetry is. It seems that you have no hesitation when it comes to writing what you feel.continue to not hold back. This poem is amazing

[Enigma]

Much love xo

[Manuel A Hurtado]

This is a very daring poem. Extremely stripped, raw, and ultimately powerful. Reminds me a lot of a Hemingway/Burroughs mix, with the short, blunt nature of the poem excellently bringing out the clearly displayed need for pain of the author. Excellent poem, and an entertaining, thought-provoking read.

[Enigma]

Thank you so much!(: xo