To Hell and Back

When I die oh when I  die

make sure I go to hell,

and when I  come back, 

when I come back

I'll have stories to tell.

He asked me then 

"oh why oh why would you go to my realm?

I said "I don't know, I never have

but I know it's up ahead."

When I die, oh when I die

make sure they leave me be,

distractions are my only vice

oh how they make me bleed.

They say "oh s**t he's crazy," but

I don't really mind, project it back

at me, but I'm the closest to divine.

He said "Well oh well oh well, then,

go right on ahead. Take my advise

and forget this life because

I'll take it instead."

I let him take my soul, my life, my name

my heart.

I always saw it coming, just never knew so soon

I had nothing left, not even my shoes

My face was his and his was now mine,

nothing special about it,

we were both suddenly divine.

When I die, oh when I die

make sure I go to hell,

when I come back, when I come back,

I'll have stories to tell.

Author's Note

Charles Manson allusion... I enjoyed making this.
Sorta a work in progress, kinda.

Reviews

[alien]

pretty damn awesome
i like how you used divine. it reminds me of how charles manson refers to himself as god, but still he's on his way to hell

[Sami Khalil]

A bit dark but I like it alot. You do that wonderfully ...Bravo............

[anna]

This is absolutely wonderful