What am I?

What am I?

A Poem by Ashley
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Se if you can figure it out :)

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I have the strongest power in the world, both good and bad.

I can build and destory in a single day.

Im from the deepest red to the coldest black.

Im timeless with no age.

I may die but I will allways comeback.

Nor child or adult can escape my grasp.

I go around the world blindly.

I will last for days or years.

But I am not tangable, I can never be touched but I can be felt.

What am I?

And the answer is:

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Love.

Love is one of the storngest emotions in the wolrd. No one can escape its hold no matter how far you run and hide. Love destorys and builds people. Love can be a fire passion or a black void. As everything it will die out but allways come back one day. Its timeless, love will be with you untill you die, and still go on. Love is blind, once your stuck you dont care who your with. It will last from days to years into marrige. But love can never be touched, but it can be felt.

 

© 2009 Ashley


Author's Note

Ashley
Did you get it? Be honest im intrested in what you think!

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I love the line I can never be touched by I can be felt!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I didn't get it, I was thinking about God honestly! Fun write I enjoyed it. When I knew the answer I looked back and enjoyed the part about the child or adult not escaping it. Thanks!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Very mysterious and well-worded. Honestly, I didn't get it at all. I was thinking of some sort of natural disaster, perhaps. But of course I was wrong. Brilliant.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on July 11, 2009

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Ashley
Ashley

Novi , MI



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