Revolve and rewind

Revolve and rewind

A Poem by WesleyAlexanderDavies
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A platform above thought.

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I'm sorry did I disturb the hive
It was just the place and time and my state of mind

Rewind

It's hard to disconnect from what you know is true
Even if its you that your connecting to.
Even if its you that your acting through
A ghost shackled and a shell bursting at the seems........it seems.......it seems.

You opened and found hearts in machines.
I'm sorry did I disturb the hive
It was just the place and time and my state of mind

Rewind

© 2013 WesleyAlexanderDavies


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Loved the line "you opened and found hearts in machines". i got a lot of sci fi imagery with this one, but it could easily have many more meanings! Keep up the good work and welcome to writerscafe.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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WesleyAlexanderDavies

11 Years Ago

Thanks Sam. Very welcoming place, looking forward to making many more friends.

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Added on June 19, 2013
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WesleyAlexanderDavies
WesleyAlexanderDavies

Birmingham , Walsall, United Kingdom



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Hi thank you for reading my work. This is an outlet for my creativity and not my frustrations I'm not a tormented soul on the verge of suicide riddled by vices. I'm just can't explain what being creat.. more..

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