Ten Seas

 

You always say

ten seas make a sunset

but I don't know what that means~

Author's Note

Reviews

[Neville]

Neither do I but hey, those 15 words all slung together in 3 lines
don't half work well...............N

[Alex]

Thanks Neville!!

[Neville]

My pleasure

[katja]

you display an [enviably] brilliant use of brevity here...
... your thoughts here are truly waters too deep to tread water in
*
thank you for sharing your pen
~yekaterina

[Alex]

There is nothing to envy I guarantee! Thank you for your kind review, it means a lot!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

lots packed into this almost senryu...

sometimes what is in another's mind is transposed into words that seem like some type of strange code---
and we have to wait till that sunset to understand.

[Alex]

This review is better than the writing! Thank you for your thoughts and for your interpretations Jacob.