Unnecessary

Love isn't sprawling your legs apart so far they fix your shattered head,

it is all perfect now, you can f**k the witch and break yourselves.

Reviews

[SEO]

This is wonderful and perfect. Every word is a punch and I love how short and to to the point it is.

[Alex]

Thank you very much! I appreciate the review- its very helpful :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting tale hidden in the words. You started off with direct statement and left the reader with vision and question. I liked it. Good to keep the reader guessing.
Coyote

[Alex]

I'm sorry for how rude it is, I'm a little embarrassed about my language! Thank you though.

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime we must be direct. Best poetry is the honest and true emotion expressed. You are welcome.