Animal Attraction

To be approached...

He stood,
Motionless.
Intelligent; deep, brown eyes - survey me,
Friend or foe?

Ears flick,
Inquisitive.
Nostrils; flare, steaming - scent me,
Considering options?

Edges forward,
Courageously.
Muzzle; soft, gently extends - toward me,
Whinnies a greeting.


I-I 5/11/15

Author's Note

An attempt at non-rhyming poetry...

Reviews

[RandomAuthorOverHere]

Really nice! Sounds like you don't do a lot of non-rhyming poetry, but I didn't even notice it didn't rhyme. It's great as it is. :) Horses are so intimidating xD

[Zugzwang]

I liked this a lot. But horses scare me a bit!

[WerTherBeDragons]

Appreciate you liking it since I find it more tricky not to rhyme - must be the way my brains wired!
Yep - they scare me a bit too - large beasts with big teeth & axe-like appendages! The wee Shetland ponies are worst though - they enjoy 'tasting' folk! Haha