As Long as Forevers Don't Cease

As Long as Forevers Don't Cease

A Poem by YouoweYoupay
"

your world is quiet, and time is at rest..

"

 

 

 

 

As Long as Forevers Don't Cease

 

 

Something moves,

Beneath the vermilion shirt

I had flung onto the carpet

 

Your world is quiet

And time is inert…

 

You find your way out

Not knowingly

Blessing my hour with a smile

 

The morning kiss,

You insist on one cheek

I feel a purr

Welcoming and sleek

A polite melody

Since you cannot speak

And a long glance

At the yellow bowl

 

The fur I gently groom,

Like the chaste snowfall

Preceding the briefest bloom

All withered in a memory

 

Your world is quiet,

And the moon is at rest…

 

I treasure your listening

To an aged aching chest

Even when you hear not

The calling of your name

 

In your eyes of ocean blue

Sunlight is lovelier,

And in mine

Flickers a subtle promise

 

I watch as you drift into sleep

Your sweet curled figure

Will not be mine to keep

 

The years will not linger,

And tomorrows shall sleep,

Sighing into nothings of celesta

Of no color, of no reek,

Gentle mist that bears

A dawn that shall never dare

Whine or Peek

 

Soundless with which

You are familiar

 

So that my warmth

Is for you to seek,

 

As long as forevers

Never tire or cease…

© 2012 YouoweYoupay


Author's Note

YouoweYoupay
This is a tribute to my 4 month old kitten, Munto, a few days ago I found out there might be a strong chance he is completely deaf. I was a little saddened to know, but I do not love him any less.


*Image: Timeless
*By: NachoRomero
*Link: http://nachoromero.deviantart.com/art/Timeless-253444579?q=boost%3Apopular%20timeless&qo=22

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This is a wonderfully written piece. I love my dog like she is family, so this warmed my heart.


Posted 12 Years Ago


YouoweYoupay

12 Years Ago

Aww. I'm so glad I warmed your heart. My cat is like family too. They just become part of it. Thalnk.. read more
I was going to say, as I read this - I caught on that it was about a furry critter. They become such a profound part of us. This is a poem fitting to that sentiment. Love the term Vermillion Shirt.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great imagery. I enjoyed the rhyme scheme, and I really loved the line "blessing my hour with a smile. Well done. Thanks for friending me, by the way.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is really beautiful! Such wonderful work! =)
Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is such a beautiful poem a reminder that love should not diminish with challenges.

Posted 12 Years Ago


A very sweet tribute, and still a fine poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is awesome work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a beautiful poem. Pets give us so much joy in our lives

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a beautiful tribute to an innocent. Even non-animal-lovers can't help but be moved at the peace and sweetness in this write. Just lovely!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the many good places you took me with you in this poem. I like the emotion and the desire of the poem. Our animals can give us peace and comfort. They want and need little. Give us love without limit. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago



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