Dance Away

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Why do tears stream like the rain,

and the rain falls leaving millions of stains,

like dying stars we fall asleep as we count

 

If you're about to stutter and scatter,

Dance away...

It'll soak the tears,

 

If you can't count the raindrops pouring down,

 

Walk Away...

Under an umbrella,

It might ease the fears.

 

 

Author's Note

Not one of those inspirational jewels, just something ebbing and flowing with my thoughts.

Reviews

[Rikkevi Rue]

your work has a whimsical quality that elevates it to another level, not just the message but the carrier wave is the attitude and aplomb with which you write. I always enjoy reading your words!

[angelina]

quite a powerful message. doing something and filling it with the passion of pain or doing that something to the fullest of your abilities to 'soak up' the emotion will lead to feel lighter, but when you can't let it go, it is best to find something strong enough to help cope with it. a powerful message indeed!!

[Mauricio Montoya]

great flowing thoughts, tears release and rain washes away to start a brand new day.
Excellent write.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the desire of this poem. Good to dance in the warm rain. Fear can go away with the feel of the rain on your face. All of us need to release the bad thoughts and try to go forward. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Marie Harrison]

That's right dance away!
Tear away those walls of fears that bring these tears
Break down those walls that keep us from our happiness
Dance the pain away

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Pondering thought, and wonderful imagery,
I really enjoyed this write, I thought it had depth.
Excellent write.