Hazel and Honey

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hazel and Honey

 

 

 

It was love at first sight,

 

I grinned. She was glowing in her golden robes, waiting at the door.

 

We wasted no time in introductions or petty talk, our names already introduced.

 

I would call her Black Beauty

And she would call me Yearning Green Eyes.

 

The arousing silence only spoke, drawing me to her. Into her.

 

The catwalk in my occasionally worn bright red high heels had never sounded so graceful.

 

As I made my way to the Sugar Goddess quietly folded on my coffee table.

 

I tested the back of my fingers along her fine, flawless preface features.

 

The glass in her eyes reflected my leisure yet eagerness, the straps of gold lined against her skin, firmly holding her touchable edible contents, in the robes of gold.

 

I leaned to lick her lips,

The luxurious cocoa scent,

Released in the air around her consuming my patience,

 

Slightly vexed about the minute frittered over untying

 

Her trim, tight lace surrounding her waist,

 

I began to wonder why they brought her to me with clothes on. 

 

Clothes became such a bother.

 

They printed, yet censored her splendor.

 

The glittering gold crunched and unwrapped, stroking her skin once as it fell apart.

 

I sincerely admired the luscious almond sprinkled curved coat,

 

And I impatiently clamped her lips into mine,

 

My moan released in a defeated sigh,

 

As the perfectly measured sugar and cream swirled in my tongue, melting, wonderfully complimented with the crisps of almond, honey, and hazelnut the kind, heated sensation pleasing my tastes buds.

 

I wanted more...but Mama had originally kept her for the soon arriving guests.

 

Such a waste...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Baahaaaa! Fooled you didn't I ?

Once again, the chocolate lover trick has been inspired by a wonderful writer nicknamed: Bubo. But I did not steal her idea! Mine and hers are completely different...mines are guest chocolates *cough* Well, anyway comments and reviews are appreciated.

Image (1): Pretty as the Snow
by *AmberSea
Link: http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§ion=&q=pretty+girl#/d16z1vb

Image (2): I love Chocolate
by ~ch3rrycreamshaken
Link: http://ch3rrycreamshaken.deviantart.com/art/I-love-chocolate-43516248?q=boost%3Apopular%20chocolate%20nuts&qo=4

Check out both artists' works, they're awesome. :)

Reviews

[Deviant Works]

Hahahaha!:) Wow! This was fabulous, Wella!! Had my heart racing as I licked my lips, trying not to slobber everywhere as I read. In all my life I has never craved chocolate as much as I do right now. And with almonds! Yummy, yummy! This is an utterly delicious read, every word was pure seduction and ended with a hint of your humor. And yes, I was completely fooled.:) In fact, this was so hot the way you had written it, that this could pass as erotic.:) So good!

[Emunah June.]

Beginning of poem------> O_____O
Ending of poem---------> ^_____^

Wow I was all scared lol!! You got me good!!

[Emily B]

chocolate has been getting me through the work day for several years, good one

[iamkim]

hahaha! This is so great! Very creative. I was thinking after I read the poem, I would ask you if the girl is lesbian. hahaha :)) You fooled me. I didn't expect it. Never will someone do I think. haha! Good job!

[Jeff]

Great work on this one! I was kind of confused for a second. Good job on keeping the reader on their toes.

[Madison A. Wright]

this is great!! My mouth was watering with all the detail you wrote about this.. now i want some chocolate!! Love all the detail you wrote with made for a sweet treat at the end! :)

[An owl on the moon]

There is something richly sensual about what the tastebuds do to the brain, and you've awakened that so stunningly here!

[Elle M.]

I got confused! XDD

[Color of the Iris]

Ha ha, this was cute. A little misleading. ^^ This was a great poem, and it made me smile, and feel a little awkward, lol. Thanks for the invite to read it! 100/100

~ Iris ~

[Norma M Sutton]

lol Funny. Why is it that the best are always kept for guests lol