Hazel and Honey

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hazel and Honey

 

 

 

It was love at first sight,

 

I grinned. She was glowing in her golden robes, waiting at the door.

 

We wasted no time in introductions or petty talk, our names already introduced.

 

I would call her Black Beauty

And she would call me Yearning Green Eyes.

 

The arousing silence only spoke, drawing me to her. Into her.

 

The catwalk in my occasionally worn bright red high heels had never sounded so graceful.

 

As I made my way to the Sugar Goddess quietly folded on my coffee table.

 

I tested the back of my fingers along her fine, flawless preface features.

 

The glass in her eyes reflected my leisure yet eagerness, the straps of gold lined against her skin, firmly holding her touchable edible contents, in the robes of gold.

 

I leaned to lick her lips,

The luxurious cocoa scent,

Released in the air around her consuming my patience,

 

Slightly vexed about the minute frittered over untying

 

Her trim, tight lace surrounding her waist,

 

I began to wonder why they brought her to me with clothes on. 

 

Clothes became such a bother.

 

They printed, yet censored her splendor.

 

The glittering gold crunched and unwrapped, stroking her skin once as it fell apart.

 

I sincerely admired the luscious almond sprinkled curved coat,

 

And I impatiently clamped her lips into mine,

 

My moan released in a defeated sigh,

 

As the perfectly measured sugar and cream swirled in my tongue, melting, wonderfully complimented with the crisps of almond, honey, and hazelnut the kind, heated sensation pleasing my tastes buds.

 

I wanted more...but Mama had originally kept her for the soon arriving guests.

 

Such a waste...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Baahaaaa! Fooled you didn't I ?

Once again, the chocolate lover trick has been inspired by a wonderful writer nicknamed: Bubo. But I did not steal her idea! Mine and hers are completely different...mines are guest chocolates *cough* Well, anyway comments and reviews are appreciated.

Image (1): Pretty as the Snow
by *AmberSea
Link: http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§ion=&q=pretty+girl#/d16z1vb

Image (2): I love Chocolate
by ~ch3rrycreamshaken
Link: http://ch3rrycreamshaken.deviantart.com/art/I-love-chocolate-43516248?q=boost%3Apopular%20chocolate%20nuts&qo=4

Check out both artists' works, they're awesome. :)

Reviews

[Deviant Works]

Hahahaha!:) Wow! This was fabulous, Wella!! Had my heart racing as I licked my lips, trying not to slobber everywhere as I read. In all my life I has never craved chocolate as much as I do right now. And with almonds! Yummy, yummy! This is an utterly delicious read, every word was pure seduction and ended with a hint of your humor. And yes, I was completely fooled.:) In fact, this was so hot the way you had written it, that this could pass as erotic.:) So good!

[Elizabeth]

Hahaha... The last few lines put a clever and witty twist...loved the imagery.... I'm craving some chocolate now... :)

[TL Boehm]

giggling! this was a great bit of prose/poetry

[Lipstick_Lesbian]

Oh. My. God. I want this. I want HER. What or whoever SHE is. I want her. XD This is just brilliant.

[My Fair Lady]

Sensual and teasing.. very pleasing.

[A.E. Surdam]

Oooooooohhhhhhhhhhh! Delectable, naughty, and passion! All wrapped together in kiss. Very nice. At first I had originally imagined it to be a making love scene then the picture of the chocolate came. I laughed, then thought, chocolate, oh yes, chocolate, come to me. Lol.
Very good use of words, and good imagery.
Thank you, for allowing me to read your wonderful work of art.

[tshigg]

Excellent double meaning and I like both of them. Hot, sweet, sensous and leaving me wanting for more!!

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Wella,

You had me till you got to the chocolate. Great Write again, and very teasing. Although not in this case, but it is good to see some people are able to be open minded enough to be able to write a "Gay" poem. One of the many complaints I often get is the lack of understanding of how I can write in a female perspective. I think we, as writers, should not limit ourselves to what we are comfortable with but with all possible avenues.


Sorry for the rant, excellent work. You had me salvating.

Always,

Matthew

[TamiViolet]

lol. What a dynamic piece... You had me convinced the entire time.... Chocolate is seductive, and you show just how much :-) Sexy piece that entices the spirit and warms the heart as it creates a smile on the reader's face....

Simply delicious!!!

[Rikkevi Rue]

the effect was total! and ahh the sweet release of a hearty laugh! It would not be such a sublime read were it not for the superbly phrased lines just dripping with imagery, naturally its complete conveyance of being really truly addicted to the stuff!

I marveled at the practiced accuracy of your nuanced undercurrents though my dear...such delectable... innocence?! ;-)

[.shalynn.009.]

"As I made my way to the Sugar Goddess quietly folded on my coffee table." This seems like an unfinished thought, but you used a peiod.

Very cute. I like that you write comedic pieces. Not only are you good at them, but so few people on here write them. No admiration or reputation is lost beacuse someone writes comedic pieces, as long as they are good. Not everything has to be dark, meaningful, or emotional. The only problem with writing comedy is that it's a lot harder to get away with comedy if you're not really good at it.

Luckily, you don't have that problem. Keep writing.