Secret

My secret, it walks out on me...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Secret

 

 

 

I'm not even sure what

Kind of prose this will be

 

But I write what I sense

And I write it for me

   

I will sit and I will tell

What my symptoms are

And you could be my well

Like all white sheets are

 

 

This secret of mine is

Something you can relate to

In misery or in bliss

 

 

This secret of mine is complex

Something out of the blue

I've been perplexed. Vexed.

It's damn true

You could be next

 

 

My secret walks out on me

Right to the ataba (steps) of your door

My secret it gives in and up on me

It tells the world about my core

 

  

The sky is smudged with the clouds of noon

 

And snowdrop flowers they bloom too soon

 

You can always find stanzas for the moon

 

I think about it all amidst the desert dunes

 

 

Beauty for the eye is a moment that ends

Loiters in your mind then passes like the winds

 

Like ripples of smoke

From a tobacco roll

 

Like a dewdrop that soaks

Into the sunrise call

 

Beauty does not cure

A history of scars

You'd somehow endured

But, hey, look at the stars

 

Not for hope, I meant.

Or for prose of compliment

 

But for the twinkle in its track

A light in an eternity of black

 

I live to find out what He'd made me for

But that's not just my case

 

I see it in the crimson lace

Of every war.

 

Author's Note

Comments and reviews are appreciated.

Image by =6eternity9

Link: http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§ion=&q=secret+diary#/d2dopkx

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

These are like ramblings ,thoughts that come to mind
but really intriguing and very deep and witty
beauty surly is just a moment like a wind
but what is there else to look for..i think thats what we always
do ,beauty we seek in everything..just like your thoughts
so scattered ,my reply is diverse too ,but i agree to most that you said
i really enjoyed this,really dont know why..its kind of hit my thoughts too
lovely write..

[Taz]

Wow! That was one of th most beautiful poems I've ever read!

[Dante Balsote]

I think it's kinda cute and was about something else. Until I read the ending. Sad. :'(

[fernii]

Great poem. Very good and well written. It sounds like you've just written whatever came into your head and it also sounds liek you have some true feelings within this poem. Keep writing :)

[Shardbearer99]

That was great

[PaperDoll]

Well done. Reads like a musing monologue. :)

[kaylynnmelody♥]

Loved it. I could relate, totally.

[poetic soul]

to start with, the picture is jus so awesome and so apt...relates really well to the poem...
i loved these lines in the beginning of the poem:


This secret of mine is complex
Something out of the blue
I've been perplexed. Vexed.
It's damn true
You could be next

and then the rest from "like ripples of smoke............... " till the end...
it was a sheer pleasure to read this poem!!!!

[Ivy]

Its beautiful.

[Erotic Goddess]

But for the twinkle in its track

A light in an eternity of black

Wow, such beautiful stanzas in this piece....stunning and what a great way to end my night. You did a great job here of creating a perfect mood for this, and I loved your imagery.

xxoxx

[larryb]

Very good job on this, flows real well :)