Impervious (for Matthew Kult)

a poem about obsession

 

 

The pretty girl owes what

She doesn't need to pay

His addicted eyes linger

At the victim in dismay

The screen meets his fingers

 

Her lovable smile eternal

Yet so far far away

The urge is deeply internal

 

All at once

Sweet, Bitter, and sour

His madness leading him astray

For a delicate, moist flower

In an untouchable bouquet

Reviews

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Wella,

We shall see how impervious you are my sweet. But I do love the response. You are like my a lilly so beautiful and delicate, but they eventually die. Will they have lillies for you?

I am coming Wella, I have no choice. You have been chosen....and I must do what my desires tell me to do. Then we will see how Impervious, too all of this, you really are. And when my thumb brushes your cheek and l look dead in your eyes for the first time, you will know....Death has come for you.

And hell followed with me.

Darkly and Eternally yours,

Matthew Kult

[Bubo]

Very strong images of obsession, and yes, the urge must be deeply internal for it to descend into madness........the last verse rang with beauty, it seems the ones that are untouchable are more prone to being stalked, maybe it begins as a safer option that spirals out of control.........great write!

[Color of the Iris]

This was a good poem! Keep writing!

[Misty Blue Eyes]

this is really good wella..keep it up hun

[Jeff]

Well it's interesting and somewhat alarming. I really hope this is all a joke or game or something not sinister.

[Jaidyn DeVoir]

So atleast you know the psychopath is interested in you. I wonder if its like whem we were in third grade and this is his way of saying he has a crush on you? Course he could be serious....either way....creepy...

With Love,

Jaidyn

[Wondering Mind]

well, well, well, Wella. What have we here?! This is flower power with an accent. I like it, and I like the attitude.

[Geralyn Miller]

Can we say someone is obsessed? I believe we can!
Nicely written. If I were you, love, I'd take up hand to hand combat and kickboxing along with a couple of martial arts before mr. obsessed shows!

[Wolf]

loved it keep up the good work

[Tomi]

hmm..