Veil

C alm your soul

Learn from the dawn

Tranquility and faith

The world slowly

Opens its petals;

Pink and blue tinted in graceful gray

And the world sees 

The tiny diamonds in your eyelashes

So be calm ...

Don't cry,

For the kindness within you

Will make you disappear

All creation will breathe a veil of mist

And you will be saved

Author's Note

Hi. Thanks for reading.

Reviews

[H L Rose]

When I get stressed or my heart races towards a panic attack, I often take to reading something soothing.
This is the sort of thing I would read when I needed to calm and settle myself, and I think it would definietly do the trick. It seems very abstract, so I think one could derive from it the meaning needed in the moment.

I’m glad to have read it!

[YouoweYoupay]

Anxiety and panic attacks are awful.. I don't wish them for anyone! It makes me happy to know my poem helps you stay calm. Thank you so much.

~Rain.

[H L Rose]

Of course!

[d]

so mental and at the same time reassuring. it is what it describes and comforting to read. and YoYp, glad to meet you.

[Kelly Scheppers]

It's as though the voice of God himself has spoken. I feel cleansed and my soul is free...stirring read!

[StarNinja]

If someone read this to me every day, I'd be a lot more relaxed I think. Nice image to go with the poem. It almost feels like it sprung unbidden from the aether in response to the words you wrote. Very nicely done!

[Cherrie Palmer]

very smooth each line flows to the next making a delightful bouquet of morning.

[YouoweYoupay]

A delightful bouquet of morning! That's a nicely, poetic review. I thank you for it.

~Rain.