I agree with your wisdom and thoughts.
"Grow softer. Go forth and go back,
Bend soundless, but don't break or spill
Into what's quite alright to lack."
The above lines. Soft but powerful wisdom. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
what words to give,to shake..always solid
and always around here and there,now its time
to rest..to bend ..lay your head down to sleap
breathe easily for its time,one more down
more or less who counts..no more running
time to rest..lay your head to ground
and be grateful for what it did sound
sad i think ,sad and lovely..
How did this one slip past my radar? Another thought provoking piece about tar and drowning in said tar. I got the sense that this was the last moments of a person slipping beneath the slick surface. Unlike quicksand, tar is sticky and is a death which lingers many millions of years after the fact. It makes one wonder what thoughts run through the minds of those who must wait the long agonizing minutes while they sink into oblivion. Truly your talent is outpacing this little old website. When are you gonna go mainstream, Rain? When are you gonna sell your soul to the Man?
A+ for effort
A++ for content
A for grammar and spelling.
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