this is a really mind provoking poem. it would be the reflection of different feelings, maybe lonliness, maybe missing someone or something...
i liked how you have penned it with such lightening messages in the darkness..
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Thanks for the insightful review, Khalid. Appreciated. : )
sometimes it is good to know when to open your eyes
and sometimes it is good to know when to close them
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, Emily Burns. : )
-Rain.
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the work reminded me of someone that i always caught looking at me with his third eye, his vision wa.. read morethe work reminded me of someone that i always caught looking at me with his third eye, his vision was clouded by judgment and negativity, i closed my eyes a lot so that i couldn't see that he was looking
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This sounds very interesting. Is it possible for even those people gifted the third sight to view ot.. read moreThis sounds very interesting. Is it possible for even those people gifted the third sight to view others in a judgemental, negative light? I wonder..
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vision isn't only granted to those who have ascended the baser and earthly plane
vision.. read morevision isn't only granted to those who have ascended the baser and earthly plane
vision is common and can be used commonly, i still remember how it choked me
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Wow... is this the reason why I sometimes feel very uncomfortable around some people? Even when we d.. read moreWow... is this the reason why I sometimes feel very uncomfortable around some people? Even when we do not exchange conversation of eye-contact?
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i would suggest that you read about being an empath
this is a decent description http:/.. read morei would suggest that you read about being an empath
this is a decent description http://www.lifehealingenergy.com/what-is-an-empath.html
I get swayed by other's emotions very easily, and it's only when I'm distanced from these people tha.. read moreI get swayed by other's emotions very easily, and it's only when I'm distanced from these people that I would be able to think clearly for myself, and realize I have been affected by their energy or wave of thoughts. I am not sure if I can be described as an empath, but it is not easy for me to spend time with a versified crowd of people. Thank you so much for the link! I learned alot today. You have a beautiful mind.
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there are tips for protecting yourself, grounding, time outdoors, drinking lots of water, taking a b.. read morethere are tips for protecting yourself, grounding, time outdoors, drinking lots of water, taking a bath to rid yourself of the remains of each days negativity
"The Universe is made of stories, not of atoms."
~Muriel Rukeyser
"There is no one more rebellious or attractive than a person lost in a book."
“He allowed himself to be swayed by his con.. more..