Again

A Poem by Karnektia W.

First song i ever wrote. I was really depressed when i wrote this and at the time i was friendless, no one wanted to know me. So i wrote this song.

I'm a lone girl, in a lonely world.
Trying to find away, to make it
though the day. I'm here again,
on my own. I still can't seem to
find anyone.

I'm tying to find my own way, but
something keeps me to stay.

I'm just a girl in this cold, cold
world again. I'm trying to find
some space but I can't seem to
run away, again. But I'm wanting,
and needing this to make me
feel at least ok. But I just feel
here, again.

I wanna be a free girl, out on my
own. Basking in the glorious sun,
just being, being someone. But
reality just set in, again.

I'll never be this girl, i'll never be
there in the world so...

I'm just a girl in this cold, cold
world again. I'm trying to find
some space but I can't seem to
run away, again. But I'm wanting,
and needing this to make me
feel at least ok. But I just feel
here, again.

I'm trying to be someone I'm not,
but yet I am. I want to let my self
know that I can be....all that I can
be, all that I can be.....

I was just a girl in this cold, cold
world again. I was just trying to
find someplace to to run to, again.
I was just wanting and needing
something to make me feel ok.

Again.........again

© 2010 Karnektia W.

Author's Note

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nono

I like this very much. Because when i write i mostly write about being alone and on the last, third, and sixth stanza it might be a good idea to use just one cold instead of two. But if that's your intention then i would just leave it because i hate to criticize people. Because I think you should write how you want and people should learn to except it. If you write with bad grammar i say so what. But if your trying to get published it's not a good idea. VERY VERY VERY NICE POEM LOVE IT VERY MUCH.