Hate

I HATE YOU!

I say it with such certainty

You continue to play with my mind

But worse yet, my heart

 

Your loving words

Your gentle caress'

Pulls me back into your web

OH what a web you weave

 

Time and time again

I berate myself for such stupidity

Believing in the hope you give

Knowing its not the real  you

 

Flashes of reality, moments of clarity

Reveal the contempt in your eyes

In your heart

You HATE me too

Reviews

[A. Amos]

This is deep and so honestly my friend, love your soul as you always write from your heart

[Weezie76]

Thank you! that means alot! Sometimes the written word is the only way we can express ourselves!

[A. Amos]

So true my friends and you're most welcome

[That_Girl]

Ahhh you're right! I do love this! :D

[Weezie76]

Thanks you! :)

[Damien Davison]

Intense, I enjoyed the lines, "Your loving words, your gentle caress, Pulls me back in to your web, Oh that web you weave." Nice write.

[Weezie76]

Thank you :) I'm looking for more inspiration now...everything tumbled out and now I'm dry :(

[David Lewis Paget]

'Berate' I think is the word in line 10. Love and hate are intermingled here, as they often are in intense relationships. Unfortunately, they usually end in mutual recriminations; don't we all know it?

[Weezie76]

Sadly yes! And yes...berate! Going on 3 hrs sleep :(

[David Lewis Paget]

While we're at it, one too many 'you's in line 11, and 'moments of clarity reveal - not reveals.

[Weezie76]

Ooops!!! Thank you!!!!