Where have you been?

One of my very first songs, my first broken-hearted love experience :)

Where have you been all day long?

I waited patiently and tried to be strong.

Then I strived to find you close by my side,

Yet there was an empty place alongside...

Now I feel that I miss your smiling eyes...

 

I'm just not able to stop these love cries,

I'm just not able to stop these love cries...

 

Where have you been? The stars are so unfair.

I know, I long for the scent of your hair,

Flavour of your kiss, which makes my heart melt.

I got lost in myself; just your presence can help...

I sense longing for your shining eyes...

 

I'm just not able to stop these love cries,

I'm just not able to stop these love cries...

Author's Note

I will be glad if you respond, this is one of my first works. Yes, maybe it lacks metaphors and such, but it has my true feelings inside, I hope you enjoy it :)

Reviews

[mmzx]

i can sense the emotions in this poem. It's written v sweetly.

Where have you been? The stars are so unfair.
I know, I long for the scent of your hair,
Flavour of your kiss, which makes my heart melt.

5 stars.

Anyway, thanks for your review (: