Sinking

I'm sinking, so fast it feels like falling,
when people ask where I'm falling I know I'm not cause there's no bottom to hit,
I've gone beneath it, I'll go down farther, weights tied to my feet,
tied to my hands I can't reach, can't look to the surface,
weights round my neck, a weight on each shoulder too, one's red and one's blue,
I sink, sink faster,
sinking calmly I keep going, wondering how long light can fade before it's gone completely,
Do you miss me?
as I sink, do you remember me?
When I fell was it you who pushed me?

Reviews

[Ken e Bujold]

nice read ghost. great opening line. solid build from there. some interesting bits to chew on..how long indeed can that long light burn before it fades

Ken e