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Compartment 114
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Slendy

Slendy

A Poem by мalғy
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Yeah creepy pasta.

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The slithering ways
Sick fantasy
The unnatural appearance 
His face has dimensions but no detail

No color
No emotion
No mercy

For he has no eyes to see
No smile to express the common emotions 

Those slithering ways.

© 2014 мalғy


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 мalғy
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Dimensions but no detail is certainly a creepy thought. Almost reminds me of a snake wearing a stocking over his head so he will not be identified... Not that that makes a whole lot of sense. Haha. Anyway, this was very well written.

Posted 10 Years Ago


 мalғy

10 Years Ago

Yes! I honestly love the different creepy pasta website has a lot of stories that influences my writ.. read more
Ashira Macy

10 Years Ago

Oh that is pretty cool. Inspirational websites are the bomb.
 мalғy

10 Years Ago

They truly are they give inspiration
Hm...I found this interesting. I love the title, actually. It helped with the description of this. As I read this, I pictured a man who looked normal, but who was able to turn into a demon. He cares about nothing and shows no emotion, no mercy, like you wrote. There are many ways to read or interpret a poem, but I do love the idea and creation of this. Very wonderful!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Now this is a very interesting poem Tay.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on August 6, 2014
Last Updated on August 6, 2014
Tags: slendy, creepy, weird, twisted

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