The Proposal

Just something

Look at tonight, your eyes are shining, Oh so bright.

So let me take your hand, on such a perfect night.

Let me tell you what forever feels like.

I hold your hand in mine, the icy breeze causing chills.

Yet, your still oh so  beautiful in that moon light.

Let me get on one knee, let me show you what this ring feels like.

Oh I want to show you your future, the future you have with me.

I want to make you feel like a queen with this dazzling ring.

Let me love you, hunny just let me love you.

Oh darling this isn't a mistake let me prove it to you.

Now as I hold your hand tightly in mine, let me ask you the question that brought me here with you, tonight.

It is the question of love.

The question of forever.

The promise of a life time.

As this questions flows from my lips, trailing in the icy breeze.

Let me take your cold hand in mine for this means forever.

Your corpse is mine to keep, cause darling this ring wasn't cheap.

You may be cold, you may be lifeless, you may not speak but d****t hunny your gonna be a keeper.

We roam the graves of un-noticed dead ones but tonight we will make a statement. 

No matter how dead you may be, let me tell you that this ring will set you free.

Oh darling your skin is so fragile, let me help.

Oh darling I want forever in this oh so dry and damp cell, the cell of death that brought us here tonight.

Just let me love you and promise you will say yes.

So let this question flow my heart no longer beating.

Let the question wake up the sleeping.

For tonight we change history in the mausoleum because for the devil my soul to keep, cause in the morning you will be by me forever.

So my lovely love of the dead with fragile skin and blue lips.

 Will you marry me?

Author's Note

This is the first thing I have written in a very long time so please just tell me the honesty.

Reviews

[stephen dillon]

very good plot and nice tempo i usually don't like ryhming but this is well done.
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[мalғy]

Thank you so much:)