Away from the Glass

They said to us once

We'll always be alone here

With these padded walls

Reviews

[Ancient My Enemy]

I enjoyed this one very much. I like the dichotomy of being alone in a padded room, yet alone WITH someone. Are there two people in the room, or only one? It gives the reader something to chew on, no matter how many times it's read. Very nicely done, thank you.

[Damian Alan Gray]

Good Haiku, in my unprofessional opinion, should have physical impact upon the reader. This one punched me right in the gut and made me go: "umph!" I loved this poem ... as well as the bruise it left behind! Thanks!!!