Piss With Ink

Piss With Ink

A Poem by Andrew Watson
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"What is this? Smells like piss. What is this? This is piss; piss with ink." -Sweeney Todd

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My own sin is enough to sicken
Yours is enough to kill
Even as your ego remains never stricken
You drown the innocent in sorrow
Every day you live as if there’s no tomorrow

Seize the day
No matter how many die for your selfish pleasure
Everything’s about you so don’t waste it away

Give her your attention
She has something to say
Everyone should know
She’s decided she’s gay

You go girl
F**k them over hard
The world is your playground
No point in being bound
Put your pokerface on and lay down your final card

Give her your attention
She has something to tell
Everyone should know
She’s decided to, against love, rebel

It feels good
Placing them in a living Hell
They don’t deserve it but you really should
Simple slight-of-hand and they’re under your spell
Do it

Cheat?
No, win
It’s your path chosen for their defeat
If you must you can always do it again
Chin always up with the help of a quick hand

Give her your attention
She has something to make clear
Everyone should know
She enjoys getting drunk drinking this piss we call "beer"

Give them the time bomb
Call the time bomb your heart
As soon as they’re calm
You can tear the Earth apart
Out with a little more than simple "bang!"s
Not only do you have fast hands
You also have fast fangs

No one likes you
But it’s of no importance
No matter how many you irritate
No matter how much they hate
In your own mind
You’ll always be 1
In your one-member crew

© 2008 Andrew Watson


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Wow, this is a fantastic rant. A well written ride through your eyes. Such strong emotional warfare here but seemingly so well deserved!
"Seize the day
No matter how many die for your selfish pleasure
Everything's about you so don't waste it away "
The punches keep coming all the way down to the last line and your poem expresses so much. You really do paint so well the pathetic traits of one who drinks too much of "this piss we call 'beer' "
Excellent writing!



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Andrew Watson
Andrew Watson

Kingston, TN



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My name is Andrew Watson. I enjoy writing poetry, short stories, novels, etc.. Besides writing, my passion is criminal justice. I also enjoy some video games, mainly old school Sega games and the Ace .. more..

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