Disappointment

Continuing to see friends throw their lives away, I still can't express my feelings fully, even in poetry. But this is my attempt.

I thought you were better
Where's your morality?
You take advantage of her
You make her wetter
Why are you attracted to anything without legality?
Why are you attracted to error?

Passive aggression to the point of depression
What the hell happened to you?
I can't hold myself in repression
Contrary to what I thought, you never really grew

Sin isn't all it's made out to be
Violently it will swallow you whole
Perhaps it's already taken your soul
Monotonous melody always stuck on the same key
I know what I speak of
Did your selfishness consume your love?

You're turning into complete filth
I don't want to let you go
You're turning into a complete loser
You no longer let what I saw in you show
You're becoming everything I hate
A hopeless boozer
But maybe it isn't too late

Being a s**t isn't justified
Letting your nature be rectified
We might be animals but we do have a brain
We have an ounce of intelligence in us that keeps us sane
You've proven me wrong
With your sinful song
A lifestyle for immoral fools

I wish you the best
But this way's for the worst
The way you've become gives me no rest
I hope you awaken
Quit pretending to jest
This is no comical matter

Reviews

[Katrina]

Oh my wow Andrew!
I got chillbumps.
I understand completely how you feel, even more-so now.

This was...great.

[None]

You care and you only want the best for them. Some people have to learn the hard way and won't listen...sometimes it's lethal. I think by you showing a shining example, you speak volumes and hopefully they will wise up. Your words: "Monotonous melody always stuck on the same key
I know what I speak of Did your selfishness consume your love?" ...you display such clever points! A wonderful poem intended to bring the lost sheep back home. Excellent write!