Wakes of Winds

He appeared, gently brushing the petals of a serene, coloured life

The flower shuddered, sighed, joyful, opening to the light of his heart

Eyes met, minds met, life met; an old dance divine

Face to face, fellow to flower, souls mirrored in eyes, intertwined and inseparable

"Not right"s and "so wrong"s filled their ears, two sides shouting somber words that burned like acid

Neutralized by their basic connection, strong in spite of separation, deep in spite of distance

Mountains overcome, oceans swam; binded hands; their stand illustrated in truths honesty

Unity achieved, fears shattered, molds broken, purity between and nothing less, sublime bliss

 

Forever forward, moving, flowing, showing courtship, with all colours glowing

Soldiering on, striding through hardship, happy always, whole, fulfilled

Lives filled to the brim with happiness, companions in a state of ineffable peace

Infinitely eternal and still their blooming love flourishes in the wakes of winds calling

Reviews

[Passingdaze]

A beautiful work. Full of wonderous imagery and flowing like a river into the sea. Captivated me from the start and held me throughout. Excellent.

[TheGhost]

great writing

:)

[Serend1p1ty]

What a write.
One word.
Serene.
I felt so at peace whilst reading this. Maybe it's the fact that it's 1:46 in the morning or it's this awesome song I'm listening to, but this was wonderful.
Great colab.

Yours truly,
cloud6