Her

Her

A Poem by Koname Kido
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About a woman who I fell deeply in love with and I still love, even though she is married and a mother. Her and I shared many great memories, but good memories mixed with time tends to make them sour.

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Her lips red like the blood in her wrists,
Her eyes blue like the sky we watched,
Her lips rubies in a world full of coals,
Her hair black as a midnight raven,
Her skin white as porcelain and pearls,
Her hands fragile like a newborn child's,
Her voice gentle as a midsummer breeze,
Her embrace motherly and strong,
Her mercy as endless as her grace,
Her love the missing piece to me

© 2014 Koname Kido


Author's Note

Koname Kido
Somewhat free-form. I focused the words more to be visually enticing rather than rhyming and consistent.
Yes it's her in the picture.
Comments are appreciated.
Thanks for reading~

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I love works with vivid imagery! This hits the sweet spot. :) I'm glad you chose to keep it free form and didn't bind it in a specific form since the poem retains a raw feelings that we all so desperately try to incorporate in our works.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Koname Kido
Koname Kido

Russia



About
My name is Koname, I am twenty-seven years old, and I work in home remedy medicine. I was born in Russia, moved to Dalkeith, Scotland, as a young kid, and lost my father at a young age. My mother .. more..

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