Foolish

just anouther sappy poem of a lost love

I was a never a fool.
Love was staring
right in my eyes,
always and forever
out of my reach 

I didnt try.
I didnt want to fall.
I knew what it felt like,
to hear the wind
rush past my ears

I thought to love
was to show your back.
Your weakness, your fears
all came to light
when the sunshine shone

I was always a fool.
I couldnt see it.
only love can be true.
easy to embrace,
never out of reach

I should have.
to jump from heights
is Ecstasy in simple words,
the music played on breezes
my ears cant hear it now...

I never learned
to find love and know it.
the hardest task for me
is choosing only one
the lesser of two evils

And now the words
you and i both
held more dear then any
musical sonet played
is nothing more then empty words.

"You and me,
together forever,
you and me,
Leave you?
I'd never"

Author's Note

Ment to be spoken allowed. its a rythmic thing

Reviews

[Roxie Demonia]

i love it

[Anatomical Grip]

i love the flow of the words. this is great stuff!

[Dream Weaver]

Very well penned. The flow was out of this
world. Tremendous write...

[JulieZee]

I really enjoyed this poem. Read aloud it flows very nicely. I love the simplicity of the last stanza and how it nicely wraps up the entire piece.

[FocusedAmnesia]

Amazing. Once I began reading it, I did get the rhythm to it. It flows really nicely.

[M Garcia]

I like it. Keep the poems coming.

[Ruth]

Works well too:)
Awesome work!
Really poignant and you are right, read aloud, it is cool!
xx

[Jersey]

This was amazing as far as I'm conserned. You're great at making the emotion of a poem extremely evident. I'm not usually the go to preson for rhythm so I can't really say much there. I really enjoyed reading this, keep writing and if you come up with anything further, send me a read request I'd love to read it.

[Faye]

A good build up, I love the last stanza.

[FeliciaS (Poetic Prince..]

AWESOME