Forever 13

This is for my son and it's sad so skip it if you don't want sad. But I finished this up from a freewriting I started last Christmas and felt the need to complete it for him.

Forever 13

 

 

Every minute, every day, throughout the year,

I play the game to get through.

I roll the dice...

I move my piece,

but every space I land on is “Missing You”.

 

When I meet you in Heaven

and we talk about your wings,

will you be grown or be as I remember?

Will you ever be who you would have been?

Or will you be as I remember forever… 13

 

 

David L. Carmichael

The Warrior Poet

December 20, 2010

 

 

For:  Brandon Aaron Carmichael (1994 to 2008)

“Merry Christmas, Buddy…”

Dad

Author's Note

I understand the philosophy of spirit and soul and I do believe in an absence of physical manifestation and appearance in Heaven - as we know it here. Please spare me the lectures - thanks.

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a deeply moving~touching tribute~
I am so sorry for your loss~