A Poetic Kiss

This is a card I made for my wife, Jenniffer

A Poetic Kiss

 

 

My love for you is more than I could

ever hope to put in words.

(But here are a few for you anyway...)

Your voice, when talking to me, is

the most beautiful sound I’ve heard .

(It doesn’t even matter what you say...)

 

 

I write           these words

    to brighten       your day,  to let

you know how special it is,  to let

you know it’s a calming bliss, just to

    hear you say…      anything,

         (Whether it’s “drive safe” or

     “I love you” or

           “I Do”

 

 

Your voice is a poetic kiss.

 

 

                             For My beautiful Wife,

I Will Love You 4e&4a,

I will always be your loving husband and friend,

 

David L. Carmichael

The Warrior Poet

November 1, 2007

Reviews

[Bette]

awesome i love the lay out! well done!!!!

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a very sweet and loving poem for your wife. I love the heart shape in the middle of the poem. The sincerity of this poem is felt through the whole piece. You have done this in a creative way.

[serpent]

its suprising that how sometimes the most beautiful things need to be conveyed in the simplest of manners.. no gigantic words here...not a lot of metaphors and yet this piece is as beautiful as any other...
a beautiful write written for your wife...i am sure these words are just a mere peep inside the infinite ocean of love that you have for her...
a light piece with a beauty of love!

[.]

OH GOSH! How lovely and romantic..lovely to know that kind of love still exists!

[Geralyn Miller]

Very sweet. I am always glad to see a warrior find peace and contentment with someone they love.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem for your wife. A wise man knows when he had something good. Sweet and kind words made the poem a outstanding poem of love. Thank you.
Coyote

[Dream Slave]

Very powerful, caring, and sweet poem you have here. Glad that love has struck you in such a life changing way.

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Very sweet- and I like how you made the stanza into a heart. Great job!

[Nothing Personal]

Lovely n Sweet. Enjoyable. Shows very genuine affection. Great write..

[Norma M Sutton]

This is lovely.