Forever of the Present

Even when the minutes of today go by soooo slowly - looking back, they seem to flown by

 

I drift in my mind, passing the time,

as a moment is an hour - spent.

But, when tomorrow is now, and today is yesterday,

once again, I'll wonder where it went.

Reviews

[Sweet & Tender Hooligan]

A fascinating piece. Beautifully worded. It's magic lies in it's simplicity. Yet it makes the read think a lot.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree with your words. Time does go too quickly. Seem like yesterday I had four babies to take of. Today I'm a grandfather being chased by grandchildren. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Hollow Man]

time is a funny thing, that we poets obsess over. I love your thoughts on it here.

KGS

[M]

I love how this makes you think. I read it over a few times, and it conjured up different thoughts each time...we spend alot of time wishing it away...then wishing to get it back again...

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a great way to describe thinking and how time works. Time can be such a funny thing.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

love the underlying surreal tick of this tock as the days progress and speed up with every decade spent and bent~

[Geralyn Miller]

Sometimes taking an hour to just drift, recharges the bodies batteries and restores order to a troubled mind. It is not wassted time, it is well spent time. Time is something you can't put in a box and save, so spend it wisely. and sometimes the best use is "just drifting".

Happy Thanksgiving

[Aven]

lol... Poetic Justice said it best haha

[.]

I know this feeling to well...yes time has a habit of playing tricks on us. All of a sudden your facing middle age and grandchildren..and screaming 'no no I'm not ready yet!'...LOL

[Wolf]

very nice keep it up