You Make Me

For: Jenn - just because

You Make Me

 

I guess you know me, as it would seem,

you know just what to say.

 

You make me chuckle,

you make me smile,

you make me laugh,

you make me love you…

 

I am an empty shell without you,

a lump of modeling clay.

 

You make me whole,

you make me live,

you make me see,

you make me adore you…

 

I guess you know me, as well you should,

You’ve made me what I am today.

 

I only hope that I will always be to you,

that mushy lump of clay.

 

 

David L. Carmichael

The Warrior Poet

June 29, 2008

For: Jenn - for no apparent reason

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very kind poem of love. Woman make us feel like kings and can also make feel like pawns. Great emotion and happiness in the words. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Geralyn Miller]

Very sweet, always good when a man knows emotion does not equate weakness, but rather, strength.

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swoon...

[Aven]

a charming poem :)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

the poem itself feels like an embrace~ beautiful~

[Poetic Beauty]

This is leaving a smile on my face that you see your wife in this way. It is romantic and beautiful. It is stunningly written and the emotion and sentiment is sincere. I hope you have given this one to her. :) I love to see real life marriages and romances like this

[Norma M Sutton]

A nice tribute to Jenn