Ole #7

Ole #7 = Black Jack = Jack Daniels (black label)

Swirling Jack

 

Spinning, winding, twisting bed,

swirling darkness bending light,

obscuring my listless brain in wistful thought.

Mending, binding, sewing the threads,

curing darkness saving the night,

thank God for ole #7 that I just bought.

 

Black Jack for the win.

 

The Warrior Poet

Author's Note

For the subject "The Swirling Darkness" for the Poetry and Lyrical Challenge group

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a great way to describe swirling darkness. You really stepped out of the box on this one and made a unique poem out of swirling darkness.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

spinning in the dark licorice music~

[Norma M Sutton]

Made me queezy just reading about it.