Fountain Of Destiny

The Goddess of love's secret

Sunlight seeps through the cracks
Her soul forever silhouetted
Her tears disperse into the abyss
And re-emerge as the stars we know
As our hearts collide, a whisper of her name escapes my very lips

A million souls rejuvenated by her aura, and bow down in her presence,I remember a time when love used to love her. The Goddess of love remains mute to my requests, I'm unhinged beneath her spell once she manifests her woe

I long to sculpt my love upon her innocence
And for her love to intertwine eternally within my veins. I believed we possessed forever, when our souls interlinked. A night of shooting stars as I stare into her constellation I dare not blink

She maybe impaled to the Earth, bleeding drops of purity. Only with her, my face would be petrified as I welcome her magnificent purge onto me. As we flirt back and forth, oh yes I'm forever tempted to unmask her Godly beauty

Her damaged roots reject her endorphins
Poisoned is her photosynthesis the bringer of all light and the genesis of all which is pure.
Purgatory is what has become from the once pure garden of eden, So begins the search for the fountain of destiny.

Warren Daniel II

Author's Note

I would like to apologize in advance for any grammatical errors, honest thoughts are highly appriciated. Hope you enjoy the poem.

Reviews

[Jennifer Shaw]

So descriptive! It accurately captures and enchantingly displays the dark and magnificent essence of a beautiful, damaged woman and the way she is perceived by the one who loves her. It spoke to me on a deeply personal level. It was a privilege to read this.

[Warren Daniel II]

Thank you so much I'm glad you liked it :)

[Jennifer Shaw]

You're quite welcome. =]

[Olivia]

You write about her so well in this poem.
In some parts I feel like I am looking up close at her, just staring. And at other part I feel like I am seeing her from far away, trying to make out some figure.
Well done!

[Warren Daniel II]

Thank you so much for your review and your honest thoughts

[Deepika]

Wow! This one's intellectually engaging! I enjoyed reading it twice or more just to get it's complete essence. Your work is as alluring as the beautiful world that's outset by your words. Keep writing :)

[Warren Daniel II]

I tried a different style on this poem and I am so glad that you enjoyed this piece and thank you so much for taking the time to read my work, your honest thoughts are highly appreciated

[Jamestown]

The thought that must of went behind this piece is intriguing to me, and the write itself
is wonderful! I really enjoyed this piece of work, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Warren Daniel II]

Thank you so much for your kind review, your honest thoughts mean a lot!

[Confuser]

Warren: Stopping at the end of 3rd stanza: A night of shooting stars as I stare into her constellation I dare not blink: building to this Oh my God: Brilliant: Her tears disperse into the abyss And re-emerge as the stars we know: A million souls rejuvenated by her aura, and bow down in her presence,I remember a time when love used to love her.The Goddess of love remains mute to my requests, I'm unhinged beneath her spell once she manifests her woe: I'm too breathless taken away by this magnificent writing to be concerned with grammar: Posioned (sp) & appriciated in notes: This is brilliant writing bar none. Bravo. You are so, so very talented and I thank you. I love it!! Dale

[Confuser]

Keep writing!!!....This came up with a copy so Warren: Have a great day!

[Warren Daniel II]

Thank you so much for your kind words, and for such a positive review, your honest thoughts are appreciated

[Confuser]

You're welcome. Dale

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This poem was beautiful. I really enjoyed the flow of the poem. It was to the point for me. Thank you for sharing.

[Warren Daniel II]

Thank you so much for your review, your honest thoughts are highly appreciated

[Sophy Freebirds]

The poem has a mystique quality to it.which had my brain bells ringing.Its good for my thoughts to have a bit of exercise.The way you have amalgamated Divinty and nature speaks of the romantic kind of poetry.I am a great fan of Keats and in the same way your words had that magical power to make me fly away to that fountain oftain of destiny :) *keep writing*

~Sophy

[Warren Daniel II]

Thank you so much, I just recently started writing, reading reviews like yours gives birth to even greater poems, thank you for giving it a read

[Lea Walker]

Very good poem. Nicely done.

[closed]

vivid personification

great job giving nature human characteristics

very enjoyable read


-Dream

[Warren Daniel II]

Thank you for your review

[Alisa Js]

Aloha,

Beautifully expressed, ah! This longing for the right one....I can relate well.

Thank you for you comments on my work, I look forward to reading more of your thoughts soon. I will be back...

Alisa 💫

[Warren Daniel II]

Thank you so much for your review, your honest thoughts are highly appreciated