Briaic Daydream

I someday hope to learn to dance well enough to make this a reality

I danced with latin flares

And placid glares

that only cared for your lips

My body twists and turns

As desire burns

As I reach out and kiss your wrist

Lights go out

And you step in

My girl, my dear

Where have you been?

A dream for dreamers

Fantasy of men

My soul is yearning 

let's dance again!

Your eyes of fire

My hearts desire

is to slake your every thirst

Your breath is heavy 

As I hold you steady

We come together then disperse

You smile at me

So mischievously 

I pull you close and hold you tight

My love, my dear

Forget every fear

There shall be no end to this night 

Author's Note

This piece goes out to my girlfriend. I love her so much :P

Reviews

[Groovy]

really profound poem and lovely indeed

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Warren, thank you for this... This speaks to the heart, and I'm sure your girlfriend is flattered (she must truly be special)...I LOVE this!! Beautifully written... very enticing! :)

[Tai Ryens]

Delightful read, and I liked the fact that your passion for her is showing obviously in the words of this poem. I really loved the rhymes in this piece, they're simple, yet they hold such powerful words. Beautiful poem, keep up the great work!

[bookworm]

I appreciate the tenderness of your desire for your love...such a beautiful place to be emotionally, spiritually, physically....there's a genuine purity in the way you see her now....before things get all, ya know, contaminated with mental obstructions of the ego and such...hope you get to dance with her again real soon.....

[Larry Dyson]

HSe should be proud my friend.. you write such a love to her .. in all your prose and poetry.. the flow of the dance in the poem is superb..

[EdwardBlue]

I enjoyed the view you have of this encounter, Respect, passion ,innocence. It reads so beautifully. the devotional quality , ritualistic courting flows in all around the dancers. It is a dream or fantasy ,but I would say it is more an intimate prayer for what should come and if it does you'd embrace it to your soul.

Thank you Warren

[Boldpen]

Very beautiful piece.
Apart from having brilliant language, it was filled with feelings which made it absolutely delightful to read.
Truly, amazing.

[?]

Liked this, very sweet and loving.
It flowed just like light feet on a dance floor.
Beautiful

[Enigma]

Brimming with passion and love. Brilliant work. Loved it! :D