Just You

 

 

I've come to realize that my heart is now yours

You've given me a feeling that no words can describe

The beauty of your soul I have never seen before

In me, you've installed such a magical vibe

 

I don't use big words, I just speak from my heart

But my words are so real, and my words are so true

I knew we were meant to be right from the start

In this moment in time I'm so glad I met you

 

Your beauty's so enchanting, your words have such grace

I recieve a warm feeling everytime that we speak

You're the only real reason there's a smile on my face

Without you, my sweet love, my heart just cannot beat

 

On the days when it rains I so wish you were here

I would kiss your sweet lips, you'd be showered with love

Please listen when I say, and I'm being sincere

Like my mother, babygurl, you're an angel from above

 

Every ounce of emotion in your body that exists

I will bring em all out, please just give me that chance

I will fight for your heart,  oh yes ma'am i'll persist

Til you look in my eyes and you give me this dance

 

Our time is eternal, there's no need for a clock

You're the reason I breath, you're the soil to my soul

With you, there's no way I can get writer's block

For I'm writing our story as you watch it unfold

 

I can't wait for the day when our hearts beat as one

The twinkle in my eyes gurl you put it right there

I promise to prove it, babygurl I'm not done

With you not in my life I just simply can't bare

 

So for now I'mma blow you a passionate kiss

And I hope that you catch it and hold on real tight

We shall meet in our dreams in eternal sweet bliss

Making love to our music on that magical night!

 

 

 

 

 

John Curtis Giles

 

 

Reviews

[Robert A. Pacheco]

Very nice man. Good write. Spelling girl with a "u" Isn't all that great, but I know that's the way people make it out to be nowdays, heh. Anyways, I loved it man.

~Rob~

[Kara Hadley]

good work.
"I don't use big words, I just speak from my heart
But my words are so real, and my words are so true" this reminds me of hemingway. not in his writing, but his writing style. he wrote very sussinctly.
this way good, though, at times it came off a bit cliche. i would watch that. and, one of my biggest pet peeves, pleasepleaseplease don't spell girl with a u. i'm sorry, that just annoys me. and little things like that can really cheapen a good piece of writing.

i really really liked the feeling in this.

[PureSyn]

You have such a romantic soul dear one...and it unleashes itself in such passion and elegance. I so loved the flow of it as I read it aloud. It is like a fine wine to ones heart. Keep letting your heart and soul shine...Always!!

Nicole

[Carrie Montgomery]

"Like my mother, babygurl, you're an angel from above" I like the hip-hop/with -the- times spin on this . Very sweet and full of love and romantic notions, your personality reall shines thru in this poem. Great job...NOW is this it?!?! LOL. Surely you have more poems to share with us? Keep writing.

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

Awwww.... it's so sweet :) *vomit* lol just kidding... It's really a touching poem... it sounds like you have it bad for this girl! Great poem.... hopefully you showed it to her cause she would probably swoon over it... Great write!

[Yemaya Theresa]

Such Sweet passionate words. It touches my Heart to read them. Keep going with the writing and say it from your heart. Beautiful.

[Nely Amorim]

This is my favourite section:
Our time is eternal, there's no need for a clock
You're the reason I breath, you're the soil to my soul
With you, there's no way I can get writer's block
For I'm writing our story as you watch it unfold

you have poured your heart and soul into this poem and its clear to see that you know what love is.. and isn't it selfless? :D I feel the same way about my beautiful Albert Freeman who also writes in this site (check out his work)
I'm really impressed by your work... keep it up, I look forward to seeing more from you :D
Mel

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Beautifully written, sounds like a longing for a lost love. You write beautifully! Powerful expression of love.


Great Write, JC
Rayne

[Choosing Life]

Baby gurl is a blessed one indeed....

I wonder how many baby gurls you got considering these words could touch any woman's heart...

JaCe... You wrote a beautiful poem

[Trisha]

It seems you are searching for that perfect person? Your heart shines through your words my friend. Just know that she is out there and sometimes we need to know that she or he is as stop searching so desperately and trust the universe. We need to heal and love ourselves first before we can love someone else. Letting her go and knowing she is out there is all you can do right now. Beautiful as always.