Just You

 

 

I've come to realize that my heart is now yours

You've given me a feeling that no words can describe

The beauty of your soul I have never seen before

In me, you've installed such a magical vibe

 

I don't use big words, I just speak from my heart

But my words are so real, and my words are so true

I knew we were meant to be right from the start

In this moment in time I'm so glad I met you

 

Your beauty's so enchanting, your words have such grace

I recieve a warm feeling everytime that we speak

You're the only real reason there's a smile on my face

Without you, my sweet love, my heart just cannot beat

 

On the days when it rains I so wish you were here

I would kiss your sweet lips, you'd be showered with love

Please listen when I say, and I'm being sincere

Like my mother, babygurl, you're an angel from above

 

Every ounce of emotion in your body that exists

I will bring em all out, please just give me that chance

I will fight for your heart,  oh yes ma'am i'll persist

Til you look in my eyes and you give me this dance

 

Our time is eternal, there's no need for a clock

You're the reason I breath, you're the soil to my soul

With you, there's no way I can get writer's block

For I'm writing our story as you watch it unfold

 

I can't wait for the day when our hearts beat as one

The twinkle in my eyes gurl you put it right there

I promise to prove it, babygurl I'm not done

With you not in my life I just simply can't bare

 

So for now I'mma blow you a passionate kiss

And I hope that you catch it and hold on real tight

We shall meet in our dreams in eternal sweet bliss

Making love to our music on that magical night!

 

 

 

 

 

John Curtis Giles

 

 

Reviews

[T]

"Our time is eternal, there's no need for a clock

You're the reason I breath, you're the soil to my soul

With you, there's no way I can get writer's block

For I'm writing our story as you watch it unfold"

I love those lines. Good job!

[PrissyThePoet]

Aww BabyBoy, that was so sweet. I love how you said you couldn't get writer's block. True love will make you write forever. Nice- very nice!!

[Cassandra]

I love this. Your writing...its so honest. I like how you throw in a lil slang .. "I'mma blow you a kiss" brings a real feel to it and yet your words are so poetic and heartfelt. What a combo !

[Princess_ck84]

WoW!! You have a lot going on here in this poem and it's very well done, I'm impressed :)

Your imagery and word choice is great and I can tell some real thought went into it, or you're just a wizard...lol.

Thank you for sharing something so honest and beautiful :)

[I Am THE LADY POET]

This is beautiful and so expressive. There is nothing more attractive then a man with a sensitive side. I love this poem. A Great write.

[Rain]

First of all, I am so sorry for your loss.
It is so nice to read a poem of love I don't have to search through double meanings. When you said this was from the heart, you meant it. One of few love poems I truly understand and feel. Great job. Rain..

[Collette]

What a beautiful piece. Whomever this is for must be one lucky lady...

You did an excellent job with the flow and form of this poem. It kept me involved and interested.
And THESE lines were saucy:
I don't use big words, I just speak from my heart
But my words are so real, and my words are so true
I knew we were meant to be right from the start
In this moment in time I'm so glad I met you

I like the honesty of this poem. Nothing too frilly or sappy, just simply love.

[justjenn_2u]

Realizing you have the capacity to love, marvelous! When you say you will fight for her heart, this touches my heart.

[TamiViolet]

Oh how beautifully romantic and sincere. You left me in tears my friend.
Really. Every line is perfectly penned. What a lucky girl she is!
X

[Mr. Deft Diction]

This is a song? When I first started reading this, I felt like I took removed the CD jacket and started reading the lyrics and production credits. The fact that you "don't use big words" makes this so tangible to the woman who you shout this to. It's the simple, little things that count, and you show with this piece that you pay attention to the details.

Nice scribe, homie.