Is This Real?

 

 

 

 

 

From the first time I gazed in your beautiful eyes

The earth just stopped turning and time stood so still

You lit up my heart like a star in the sky

I was losing my breath for it didn't seem real

 

Your beauty is like magic, you're a dove in the sky

You soar above the rest and you fly with such grace

The wings of an Angel, yes you taught me to fly

Mesmorized by your aura as I analyze your face

 

Enchanted by your presence everytime that you're near

I can feel your heart beating, a kind heart you have

Everytime you absorb me, I shed many tears

For you are my future, and I see no more past

 

Some simply believe that love cannot exist

Someday you'll get hurt, and just give it all up

Well my heart is all yours, I just cannot resist

I shall eateth from your fruit and shall drinketh from your cup

 

But I just need to know, is this all just a dream?

Will I pinch myself just to find out it's all fake?

Am I all by myself? We're not really a team?

If so, please be quiet, for I don't want to wake

 

I'll keep my eyes closed and listen to the sound

Of the beautiful melody that our bodies create

Your scent's so delicious, there's none other around

Your soul is so pure like a child by the lake

 

I'm glad that I found you in dreams or real life

You're forever in my heart, you're embelished in my mind

The feeling of love, to me just feels so right

And my love you do possess until the end of all time

 

From the first time I gazed in your beautiful eyes

The earth just stopped turning, and time stood so still

You lit up my heart like a star in the sky

I'm still losing my breath for this doesn't seem real

 

 

 

 

                              By John Curtis Giles

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[PrissyThePoet]

Wow, whoever you are referring to is one special lady. My favorite part is:
But I just need to know, is this all just a dream?
Will I pinch myself just to find out it's all fake?
Am I all by myself? We're not really a team?
If so, please be quiet, for I don't want to wake

One too many times have people awakened me...somtimes I would have liked to dream a bit longer.

Great poem!

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

Very nice.... It's so sweet! I think that it's a great unique kind of love poem... and it has a great flow to it... It was very easily read and it captivated me from the first stanza... I can't wait to read more of your writing... Great job!

[Jazmyne]

very nicely written.it is crazy how life takes that turn for the better and you think it is a dream....if you wake up you think it will go away. this piece made me smile. who ever this is written about must be someone very special to you. your piece brought a new meaning to "luv" poems!! a sence that you have kindness and sweetness to ya! cant wait for more writtings! take care

[Tania Leigh]

Very sweet. It's hard to believe that something is real when it is so pure and so beautiful.
I like that you ended the poem with a slight variation to the first stanza, as it wrapped it up nicely.
Well done!

[thecoolone52]

its good, not your typical boring love poem. Nice flow

[Yemaya Theresa]

Incredibly insightful. Beautiful expression of emotion. Very Lovely I really like it. Keep on Keepin on.

[None]

This is so magical and tender, you have a beautiful way of writing. I can feel the love just pouring out of this. You can't manufacture that, and it can't be forced either! Please send me any new postings...and thanks for keeping it real. lol.

[Trisha]

You know what there is no rule for rhyme. It doesn't matter the measure or the style. Don't listen to the person that reviewed before me. There is no rule and the more unique the poem the better it is. I'm so tired of people judging on the style. Being different is the way to go. I think its beautiful and full of passion and spirit. I sure do hope you find that special someone someday soon. You're such a sweetheart!

[[untitled]]

John/baby boy? The words are all beautiful and expressive, however they are all over the place. There is no natural rhythm for the reader, this could be wonderful instead of ordinary, sorry, but I have to say it how I see and feel it. There is no point in me telling you all is well wth this prose piece when it is not;, that will not help you in your journey as a writer at all. Take a good look at placement of text and consider revising...again, sorry John, but I believe in honest review.
Cheers,
Helen :-)

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Wow. Beautifully written, and captivating from start to finish. Amazing. Great Write.


Keep Writing.
Rayne

[SM Davis]

this is a very beautiful poem. Lovely and soft. Definitely one for the library. Whoever she is, I am sure she is appreciating this ...