Is This Real?

 

 

 

 

 

From the first time I gazed in your beautiful eyes

The earth just stopped turning and time stood so still

You lit up my heart like a star in the sky

I was losing my breath for it didn't seem real

 

Your beauty is like magic, you're a dove in the sky

You soar above the rest and you fly with such grace

The wings of an Angel, yes you taught me to fly

Mesmorized by your aura as I analyze your face

 

Enchanted by your presence everytime that you're near

I can feel your heart beating, a kind heart you have

Everytime you absorb me, I shed many tears

For you are my future, and I see no more past

 

Some simply believe that love cannot exist

Someday you'll get hurt, and just give it all up

Well my heart is all yours, I just cannot resist

I shall eateth from your fruit and shall drinketh from your cup

 

But I just need to know, is this all just a dream?

Will I pinch myself just to find out it's all fake?

Am I all by myself? We're not really a team?

If so, please be quiet, for I don't want to wake

 

I'll keep my eyes closed and listen to the sound

Of the beautiful melody that our bodies create

Your scent's so delicious, there's none other around

Your soul is so pure like a child by the lake

 

I'm glad that I found you in dreams or real life

You're forever in my heart, you're embelished in my mind

The feeling of love, to me just feels so right

And my love you do possess until the end of all time

 

From the first time I gazed in your beautiful eyes

The earth just stopped turning, and time stood so still

You lit up my heart like a star in the sky

I'm still losing my breath for this doesn't seem real

 

 

 

 

                              By John Curtis Giles

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[PrissyThePoet]

Wow, whoever you are referring to is one special lady. My favorite part is:
But I just need to know, is this all just a dream?
Will I pinch myself just to find out it's all fake?
Am I all by myself? We're not really a team?
If so, please be quiet, for I don't want to wake

One too many times have people awakened me...somtimes I would have liked to dream a bit longer.

Great poem!

[Melody P-]

we speak quite the same in this piece..we sing the song of love dear..a great empathy for many and you write of it well... visually you touched base on such truths and realities so beautifully** those things that most should pay more mine too..realizations that make it the worth while;)
beautiful sweets*
Great Write!!

[Annica Nadie]

Thanks for the review; now I'm returning the favor :)
I loved this so much - it was beautiful. I can't really describe how much I liked it...wow.

[Christina-Marie]

I love your work sweetie! Thanks for the review on mine! Looks like I could learn from you! Im new to WritersCafea and here to stay!

[lowena]

A beautifully romantic poem that any girl would love written about her.
May i also say that im very sorry about your mother and my thoughts are with you.

[justjenn_2u]

I liked this. You are a strong person because this poem shows that you believe in the power of love. Love an indescribable feeling that comes not so often in life and can be gone in the blink of an eye. I think you have talent.

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Good job Baby Boy. It's very heartfelt, and about love, one of my favorite topics. thanks for your review. as well. wasn't feeling well today, and you put a smile on my face. add me as your friend? i tried, but the button wasn't available. review some more? kena

[kittielyyn]

i really like this. i agree with stacy. would make amazing lyrics. great work.

[Stacy]

I can hear a musical tune going to the words that you have written. Those would make beautiful lyrics my dear.

~Stacy

[Melissia Ann]

WOW this was beautiful so filled with love and passion for your lady just simply beautiful I am glad I got to read it and look forward to reading more of your work Melissia Ann

[John Stussy]

Damn, you got it bad haha. Excellent romantic piece, must be some woman that makes you write this.