Is This Real?

 

 

 

 

 

From the first time I gazed in your beautiful eyes

The earth just stopped turning and time stood so still

You lit up my heart like a star in the sky

I was losing my breath for it didn't seem real

 

Your beauty is like magic, you're a dove in the sky

You soar above the rest and you fly with such grace

The wings of an Angel, yes you taught me to fly

Mesmorized by your aura as I analyze your face

 

Enchanted by your presence everytime that you're near

I can feel your heart beating, a kind heart you have

Everytime you absorb me, I shed many tears

For you are my future, and I see no more past

 

Some simply believe that love cannot exist

Someday you'll get hurt, and just give it all up

Well my heart is all yours, I just cannot resist

I shall eateth from your fruit and shall drinketh from your cup

 

But I just need to know, is this all just a dream?

Will I pinch myself just to find out it's all fake?

Am I all by myself? We're not really a team?

If so, please be quiet, for I don't want to wake

 

I'll keep my eyes closed and listen to the sound

Of the beautiful melody that our bodies create

Your scent's so delicious, there's none other around

Your soul is so pure like a child by the lake

 

I'm glad that I found you in dreams or real life

You're forever in my heart, you're embelished in my mind

The feeling of love, to me just feels so right

And my love you do possess until the end of all time

 

From the first time I gazed in your beautiful eyes

The earth just stopped turning, and time stood so still

You lit up my heart like a star in the sky

I'm still losing my breath for this doesn't seem real

 

 

 

 

                              By John Curtis Giles

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[PrissyThePoet]

Wow, whoever you are referring to is one special lady. My favorite part is:
But I just need to know, is this all just a dream?
Will I pinch myself just to find out it's all fake?
Am I all by myself? We're not really a team?
If so, please be quiet, for I don't want to wake

One too many times have people awakened me...somtimes I would have liked to dream a bit longer.

Great poem!

[Polly Lewis]

Ooooh....this is really beautiful. It flows nicely and presents a convincing image of love eternal.

Nice job :0)

[Nely Amorim]

JC a lovely poem, the first of yours that i've read so far and I'm very much thinking you have a very romantic soul.. wonderful work :D

[Diamondjules]

Good Lord in Heaven above, sweetie! That was one of the most beautiful things I have ever read and I have known you a long time now. Bravo, my Prince!! :) One luv! :)

[CarrieLynn {Chameleon A..]

excellent write! So sensual and delicious...like a romantic string quartet surrounded in a glowing cusp of Vanilla and Moonlight :) Can't wait to read more of your work in the future!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Such a beautiful romantic poem, John .. it makes me feel good .. you wrote this with much passion it seems for someone special.. i love the line always in my heart.. to me , once we care for someone they stay in our hearts forever .. even if we move on to someone else..
I enjoyed this .. lovely prose.
Chloe
xoxo

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

This is a stunning tribute to love - whomever your muse is a very lucky person - I hope they appreciate the depth and beauty of your words. Truly amazing work. Please post more. Blessings to you, I am sorry to read about your mother - you have so much love to give, I am sure she would be very proud of you.
Love and Light,
Siddartha

[oneZtwoLLs]

Beautiful. I'd like to read more of your writing...

[Stacy]

You should enter the contest on here where they are looking for lyrical poet things [I think that is what it said, lol].

[Nina Love]

this is so absolutley beautiful that it took my breath away.

*From the first time I gazed in your beautiful eyes

The earth just stopped turning, and time stood so still

You lit up my heart like a star in the sky

I'm still losing my breath for this doesn't seem real*


this is just so passonate.... im in love with this poem.
=)

[Nina Love]

this is so absolutley beautiful that it took my breath away.

*From the first time I gazed in your beautiful eyes

The earth just stopped turning, and time stood so still

You lit up my heart like a star in the sky

I'm still losing my breath for this doesn't seem real*


this is just so passonate.... im in love with this poem.
=)