Going to space pt 1

Going to space pt 1

A Poem by Wannabewriter16
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I'm starting a series of poems about drifting off to space. I don't promise when the next one will be as i write what comes to me in that moment.

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All these people been judging me

Well, I've been looking for way to breathe
I'm always searching my soul
Always searching for a way to leave

I have to get away from all of it once in awhile
My mind floats into the outer space
Not waiting for me

Sometimes I start to fly straight through the center of planets
To see how it would be to be an asteroid

I can only dream I find the edge of the universe as i float
Floating into another universe where no one could find me

All these haters been trying to change me
Well no one can change me,but I will change them
I tried to rearrange me
And ended further outside universe

I have to get away from all of it once in awhile
My mind floats into the outer space
Not waiting for me

© 2018 Wannabewriter16


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i like the separation of mind and body that you make ..and your poem inspires my own wandering imagination ... traveling right through a planet .. being an asteroid ..love it my friend! i think one might do well to avoid those black holes however ... the mind is a tricky place ;)
E.

Posted 6 Years Ago


sometimes we just need to get away

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on July 11, 2018
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Hello my name is Bonnie and I'm 18 years old and I love to write. more..

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