SOFT HAND

Soft hands

 Soft as feathers you hands brush against my face.

Over my lips to the back of my neck pulling me in.

For overtime that you do that my heart skips a beat for you.

The touch of your hand against my skin sends this weird feeling through me.

How could just the touch of your hand do this?

Anyone in the world would never understand this feeling unless they were in love with someone.

Nothing can stop the way I feel when your hands touch me.

Don’t ever stop baby girl.

Something inside of me starts burning and I cannot stop it.

Reviews

[Raeven]

This is definitely how I feel every time she touches me anywhere. Keep these feelings in mind when you're not doing so good, and they'll comfort you. Dreams and memories are amazing things, kinda like a huge area you can run away to and just find your inner peace.

[Wannabewriter16]

I am glad that I am not the only person that feels that way.

[TM]

Simple and beautiful. The right amount of freestyle and emotion

[Wannabewriter16]

Thank you very much!

[alifeacoustic]

Nicely done. When someone's touch makes you write, they are obviously doing something right. Great job. Softly written, with longing and desire.

[Wannabewriter16]

You are very much right. You know that when they touch you and they make yu feel like I do the you know that they are doing something right. I hope that someday that everyone feels the way that I do. Thank you for reading this and letting me know what you think. Please read other things that I have postes.

[jimmy45]

Very powerful, great description
Good job

[Wannabewriter16]

Thank you very much!! It means alot when you guys review my work and like it!