how a kiss will feel

how a kiss will feel

A Poem by Wannabewriter16
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my love life

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how a kiss will feel. 
Holding her close and feeling her body heat will be amazing.
On the inside I will feel this blazing desire to never let her go.

When I look into her eyes I will feel like a crystal lost but now found gazing into her eyes.

Anyone in the world could walk up to me at that moment but I wouldn’t know.

Kissing her and being close to her will make my heart overflow.
I know that she is my one and only true love and she makes me glow.
Something tells me she’s special but we gotta take it slow.
Sometimes when I look at her and think about kissing her I’m like whoa.

Finally kissing her in real life is gonna be awesome doe.
Every nerve in my body will be on fire though.
Everyone will be blocked out so I can kiss her slow.
Loving the taste of her lips that I know I will never outgrow.

© 2015 Wannabewriter16


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Not much to say other than its good and I agree with Rebecca pall

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wannabewriter16

9 Years Ago

Thank you!!
I really enjoy this poem. Just a thought... You are talking so seriously about wanting to kiss and be with this girl, but then your writing gets a little slacking when you say "like whoa" and "doe." I feel like if you say more seriously what you want to get across, without it necessarily writing it so simply, it would really add something to this poem. Overall, great work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wannabewriter16

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the review I will b sure not to do that with the next poem that I wright because I see.. read more
Wishful and wishful, longing, beautifully captured.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wannabewriter16

9 Years Ago

Thank you so so much for reviewing my work please feel free to do so with other as well.
alifeacoustic

9 Years Ago

Will do :)
Wannabewriter16

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the friend request!
This is really beautiful..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wannabewriter16

9 Years Ago

thank you!!!!
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A kiss
The healer
Just beautiful

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wannabewriter16

9 Years Ago

Thank you for reading!
Very romantic it's a good write

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wannabewriter16

9 Years Ago

Thank you it means alot

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Added on October 23, 2015
Last Updated on October 23, 2015
Tags: feelings, kiss, love, amazing, poem, rose, heart

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