Guarding Souls

Guarding Souls

A Poem by WanderingJane

I knew what you were from the beginning
I could smell the blood on you
it was like a cologne
You were born to spill blood
and wore it as a shield
this I expected

When you were with me 
and I with you
I did not smell blood
I could see the splattered blood on your face
but when you looked in my eyes
the world stopped
and when I looked into your eyes
the sight should have swarmed me with pity

I saw a little boy beaten and bruised 
I saw a man defending his heart
with a sword in hand
and that, my friends, is when I fell in love

I saw what everyone else overlooked
the invisible scars of a man and felt no pity
only passion and love

What he did not know was this:
I muffled my blood smell with soap
and my splatted blood with make up
I carried no sword
only a small dagger

I fell in love with a well known killer
and he fell in love with a silent but vengeful victim
only he was not the one to do her wrong
not even once

What he never saw 
was a scared and torn piece of a soul
left behind by her first love
The first love no longer owned the pieces
he simply discarded them in the street

But this small piece was all she had left
and she guarded it well
the poor man defending his with a sword
finally but it down to hold her close
but her dagger was tight in hand and he got too close

He never saw it coming
and she will never tell a soul
of the night she killed her true love
to save herself

© 2016 WanderingJane


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I liked the story in the poem and I liked the flow of thoughts leading to the surprising end.
"He never saw it coming
and she will never tell a soul
of the night she killed her true love
to save herself"
The above lines. Left the reader with something to think about. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Oh i love this one! I never saw it coming either!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked the story in the poem and I liked the flow of thoughts leading to the surprising end.
"He never saw it coming
and she will never tell a soul
of the night she killed her true love
to save herself"
The above lines. Left the reader with something to think about. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I enjoyed reading this poem, I like the flow of it. This easily is shelved as one of my favorites.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WanderingJane

8 Years Ago

Thank you! It is one of my recent pieces and I really like the metaphor

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