Broken fortune cookie

Fortune cookie message. Angel's Lady inspired me to enter this in the contest. I changed it around a bit to fit the theme. I thought about putting in something with bad grammar and misspelled words to make it seem like a real fortune cookie message. But m

To someone you know, your time is more valuable than a golden bowl full of diamonds. Make certain you know who that is.

 

Lucky numbers: 7 13 44 32 23

 

"This cookie tastes like chalk," she said, and spit it into a napkin.

"I didn't know anybody actually ate the cookies. You're really brave. What's the fortune say?" I said.

"It says to kiss you."

And she did.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

I know I should have put some grammar problems. I know.

Reviews

[Vanessa]

Oh my gosh, this was so perfect. I honestly smiled, a real
big one too, at the end. It was just awesome. I don't
think that a longer version of this would have been as
magical. Wow. I commend you for these wonderful words.
And really, the best thing about words is that you can do
anything, make any person do anything, pull a dream through.
And that's just what you did here.

--Vanessa Alyse

[Nicole Hellene]

Get rid of "I said," and this poem is perfect. Perfectly hilarious and adorable.

[shandi]

I'll have to remember that line! How romantic!

[Dani California]

I've never viewed a fortune cookie quite so romantically! You've managed to make it that way.

I really like this. Unique, clever... and somehow romantic.

I think I'll start making up my own fortunes... :)

Peace, Dani

[Susan S.]

As always, you crack me up! The graphic was a nice touch. Yes, spelling and grammar you could have done better on. (snicker!)

[Brenda Sue]

Very cute, I love it and very creative.

[Legion]

What a fortune. Live it well. Liked it.

[Rambling Prose]

'Tis my great fortune that I found this little cookie, simply adorable. What a brilliant idea! I love that you transformed something mundane into a creative way to get that kiss! The graphic you designed made for a tasty addition.

You're a creative cookie...

Loved it!