Her Tears

A Poem Of Me Responding To A Friend In Need

She says she needs me
Here, to hold her near
To catch her falling Tears

I say i would freeze
Those tears cuz for
The past few years my
Heart turned to ice
And i fear you
Might not love me no
More.

She says why would i
Think that.

I say cuz no one could
Ever love someone
With a heart cold as
Mine.

She says she loves me
No matter what my heart is like.

I say when i think of
You theres hope for
Love when im near
You my heart melts
From its frozen prison
And opens up to you

Reviews

[Kimberly Smith]

love the emotion and great write overall ...

[J]

it was nice :D great job with this . it has such a nice story in it . sweet

[Luna]

This is really sweet and it is evident you really care for whoever you wrote it for (if it was for someone). Great work!