What Did You Do To Me?

I want a casket built with lace

no wood, no fabric

to sheath my face

I want you to see these porcelain scars

that cage me in

like iron bars

I want to see how much I hurt

how you left me face-down in the dirt

I want you to see what you have done

I want you to tell

everyone

 

That you were the one that killed me

your insults leave a stain brighter than bleach

of course the bleach is what I'll drink

leave me gone and desolate to think

what did you do to me?

 

You turned a pretty girl into dust

you quaked her slivers of broken trust

you cut the strings that held her up

spiked her perfect coffee cup

 

I want you to see what you did to me

I want you burn with rage and insanity

I want you to suffer like I have done

I want you to tell everyone

 

That you were the one that killed me

your insults leave a stain brighter than bleach

of course the bleach is what I'll drink

leave me gone and desolate to think

what did you do to me?

Author's Note

A song I wrote to all my bullies.

Reviews

[Kaitlynn A. Black]

I know this may sound bad, I don't mean it to be... but isn't this kinda like an ode to the bullies? Since it ends in the negative, wouldn't this be telling the bullies that they've won? Is that the message you were aiming for?
Granted, it's penned very well, but... it just got me thinking.. =)

Kate

[That_Girl]

Hell yeah, you tell 'em what's up! ;p This is great, sad for me to read, cause I see how they have effected you, but really great, hun. :)

[K-mo]

nice work, it really is a powerful song

[Rob Santana]

Deep write. Well penned. I hate bullies!!! I was bullied as a child.

[Maria M]

I love it !!! :)

[Admiral Kirk]

Whoa... Awesome song... Makes me wanna write a song... Which I will...
I wish people would stop being bullies. There's no reason to make someone feel like this...