Method To Your Madness

Lyrics to a song that I wrote about my EX-friend Michelle.

This tunnel sure is long

and I can't keep holdin' on

Cuz I hear what they say

and it wears me away

along life I coast

and that you hate the most

you hate you get no reaction

live without satisfaction

now you know how it feels

to be on the other side...

to be on the other side...

 

(Chorus):

Do you really have to speak that loud

Do you really have to be that proud

I hope there's help behind my sadness

I hope there's method to your madness

 

Verse 2:

To keep me all alone

to rip you of your throne

don't it hurt?

don't... it... hurt?

 

(Repeat Chorus)

 

Bridge (slower):

This tunnel sure is long

and I can't keep holding on

so please give me a break

I've got a lot at stake

I've got a life at home

I'm not completely alone

I've got some friends out there

not that you would care....

not that you would care....

 

(Repeat Chorus twice)

Reviews

[Marie]

I know little about songwriting, though I lived with a songwriter once, and have wwritten a few myself. I really like your lyrics, but am not sure about the order of your verses and bridge. However you know more about that than I do. Yous "Sad Love Quotes" are great...they'd make a good song too...
Your best lyrics are "I hope there's help behind my sadness/I hope there's method to your madness..."

[A. V. Madison]

Marie, I love when you review my writing, because you don't proceed with the generic "Nice write/I love the darkness and imagery/Thanks for sharing, I loved it/etc.". You actually give pointers on how to make it better. Thank you for that. It helps me become a better author, poet, songwriter, etc. Thanks for your continual help, and for being a fan. :)

[Marie]

Generic work I brush off with a generic phrase. Work that shows imagination and potential rate a real review.

[A. V. Madison]

*blushes* Oh Marie xD

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow those are excellent lyrics... I stared out writing lyrics for my old band... your words are cleaver and powerful... it hurts when someone we care bout becomes someone we don't know for n reason. The human psyche is a fragile thing.

[afra]

wow ......i love this one .....its kindda sound like a song ...keep writing

[A. V. Madison]

It is a song xD

[afra]

oh good then

[Enar]

more of a song then a poem right,
I still like it!

[A. V. Madison]

Yeah, it's lyrics to a song I recently composed. And thanks :)

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

I sang the whole thing! Love love love it! Great work!

[A. V. Madison]

Oh Kenzie you flatter me, mah'dahling.

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Daaaaahling, your just so wonderful, I can't help but love all that you write!

[A. V. Madison]

Daaaaaahling, when you said 'write' I thought it rape! hahahahahaha