Spring Cleaning Senryu

Spring Cleaning Senryu

A Poem by A. V. Madison

Armed with a wood broom
room smelling like dust and pain
God damn spring cleaning

© 2013 A. V. Madison


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A. V. Madison
xo

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Amazing piece

Posted 11 Years Ago
chuckling here... you got it down.

Posted 11 Years Ago
That's one way to look at it.

Posted 11 Years Ago
I've always loved a good haiku myself. Claiming the room smells like "dust and pain" indicates some sort of personal attachment as well. I could almost taste the silent whisper of a hidden meaning.

Posted 11 Years Ago


A. V. Madison

11 Years Ago

Hey there Tai, haven't seen you in forever! Thanks for the review :)
Tai Ryens

11 Years Ago

My dearest pleasure! And nor have I contacted you ..

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