Spring Cleaning Senryu

Armed with a wood broom

room smelling like dust and pain

God damn spring cleaning

Author's Note

xo

Reviews

[zainul]

Amazing piece

[Chris]

chuckling here... you got it down.

[Marie]

That's one way to look at it.

[Tai Ryens]

I've always loved a good haiku myself. Claiming the room smells like "dust and pain" indicates some sort of personal attachment as well. I could almost taste the silent whisper of a hidden meaning.

[A. V. Madison]

Hey there Tai, haven't seen you in forever! Thanks for the review :)

[Tai Ryens]

My dearest pleasure! And nor have I contacted you ..