If You're Coming

If you're going to walk here

leave without grief or despair

because your footprints mean wonders

like your breath in the air

 

If you're going to sit here

please don't scuff the paint

because I've been newly colored

and I intend to leave as a saint

 

If you're going to live here

don't leave with a trail

and surely in this life

I will quickly fail

 

If you're going to love here

to another your problems can spout

because I should tell you know

I'm not used to being cared about

Author's Note

The meaning of this poem means that if you come into my life, all of your actions will be remembered- both good and bad. Please review.

Reviews

[Pax]

i really like the intro. a very sad poem. great job

[A. V. Madison]

Thank you, Willyam.

[Tai Ryens]

Excellent job with this poem. I admire your ending.

[A. V. Madison]

Thank you.

[Forever Hidden]

I don't know what to say. I really don't! =)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

We must always remember that our actions will always have an effect on others so we must think before we act... excellent work.

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Maddie :) This is so excellent. It's kind of like you took what's been on my heart and turned it into a masterpiece. This is amazing. I really, really love it. Fantastic poem.

[A. V. Madison]

Thanks wifey-kins xD

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

XD Not a problem :) You're writing is getting better everytime i read it, my dear. I have some(lots) of catching up to do!

[A. V. Madison]

Haha I'm always adding new things.

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

And always getting awesome. :P I need to write more.